Category: Writers Block
"Broken"
By La’Chelle Scarlet
When you love,
But are not loved back,
The pain is just too,
Much to bare.
The only for you,
Hasn’t noticed you,
Not even sent,
A glance your way.
The tears have fallen,
But do no good,
Good at all.
The scars have been,
Dug deep.
Pain is just too much to bare.
You are to the point,
When no tears will fall.
You feel nothing.
You just close,
The door.
You might as well put,
A bullet in the head.
You might as well put,
A knife through the heart.
You might as well,
Just be knocked out.
You might as well sleep,
Sleep forever.
You want nothing.
You need nothing.
You see nothing.
You feel nothing.
You hear nothing.
You’re done.
You’re gone forever.
Forever sucks you up,
In to a dark unknown.
Where you are nothing.
You can’t escape.
The shots ring out.
The pain stabs through.
The coldness shatters.
The screams pearse.
The heart shatters in to pieces.
The fear sucks,
You no more.
There is nothing,
Left there.
There is numbness now.
When this has happened to you.
There is nothing,
Nothing at all.
You’re broken.
You did something with the word rhymes that fits well with the poem. Good job. I like your word choice. This poem truly defines what it means to feel numb and hopeless. This poem is filled with pain and sadness. Cheer up though. For who ever wrote this poem, there will always be a better day.
Thanks. I wrote this poem a few years ago. I like it though.